Tuesday, 30 July 2019

my new years eve poem


I feel the people scared like a mouse when a cat tries to eat them but with shooting. I feel them running trying to get out like the mouse trying to run in his house before the cat gets him.
It was very sad of what happened I feel the family's sad to see their family gone like when the cat doesn't catch the mouse. The one thing that is as bad as that is that the shooter has covensed another person to do it.


As he walked in with a gan and  I heard a bang and screaming I knew what happened it was not amazing

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